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My Book Description - 5/8/2008 11:34:51 AM

WilliamCoburn

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A father who says �Jesus is the only way to Salvation�
A mother who says �The Watchtower Society is the only way to Salvation�
And a scared little boy�

THE SPANKING ROOM: A Child�s Eye View of the Jehovah�s Witnesses

What do you think? All comments and criticisms are welcome.

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RE: My Book Description - 5/8/2008 4:05:20 PM

hvt

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William,
Very interesting to say the least. I hope you will give a more indepth preview. God bless you

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RE: My Book Description - 5/9/2008 9:40:55 AM

Kathrynpagecamp

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William,

Is the book fiction or non-fiction? The first three lines work well for fiction, but novels don't generally have subtitles. If it is a novel, you might want to cut the subtitle, which dilutes the punch of the main title. If it is non-fiction, you should make that clear in the description at the top. Just my opinion for whatever it's worth.

The first three lines definitely capture my attention. If it is a novel, go for it.

< Message edited by Kathrynpagecamp -- 5/9/2008 9:49:04 AM >

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