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Stolen - 6/25/2009 11:40:05 PM   
PixieSunBelle


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My darkest days
I shared them with you
Opened up for once
I trusted you

I trusted you with my life
I guess it was a mistake
You stole something sacred
Something meant for someone else
Something meant for my love

With your words
You manipulated my mind
My heart
I was fragile at those moments
For what was stolen
Cannot ever be replaced

Those memories forever haunt me
Haunt me of moments I regret
Haunt me of times of depression
Whether it was intentional
You left me with a broken heart.

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RE: Stolen - 6/26/2009 11:09:29 AM   
slushie


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Status: offline 		Haunting but beautiful. I can't think of any corrections that you need to make.

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RE: Stolen - 6/26/2009 11:21:15 AM   
PixieSunBelle


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