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PixieSunBelle -> Stolen (6/25/2009 11:40:05 PM)

Stolen

My darkest days
I shared them with you
Opened up for once
I trusted you

I trusted you with my life
I guess it was a mistake
You stole something sacred
Something meant for someone else
Something meant for my love

With your words
You manipulated my mind
My heart
I was fragile at those moments
For what was stolen
Cannot ever be replaced

Those memories forever haunt me
Haunt me of moments I regret
Haunt me of times of depression
Whether it was intentional
You left me with a broken heart.




slushie -> RE: Stolen (6/26/2009 11:09:29 AM)

Haunting but beautiful. I can't think of any corrections that you need to make.




PixieSunBelle -> RE: Stolen (6/26/2009 11:21:15 AM)

Thanks!




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